tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-394718683782139041.post5418515499905057469..comments2023-10-12T03:40:27.407-06:00Comments on Snapshots: Introducing Peter CountermanMorganhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02173810987391935584noreply@blogger.comBlogger11125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-394718683782139041.post-71353050400181805812012-11-10T20:30:24.323-07:002012-11-10T20:30:24.323-07:00He's interesting! I love the lines about weari...He's interesting! I love the lines about wearing stripes. Such a great character reveal.Cameronhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05407917830307384493noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-394718683782139041.post-28812718862097782302012-11-10T18:23:23.541-07:002012-11-10T18:23:23.541-07:00Hmmm... i love the hint of personality with the nu...Hmmm... i love the hint of personality with the number counting. between the "always new" and the number trait, it seems your character has some great potential! <br /><br /><br />- barbara @ de rebus<br />www(dot)barbaragildea(dot)comBarbarahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05481035784237871634noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-394718683782139041.post-85801149925054073252012-11-10T14:35:22.965-07:002012-11-10T14:35:22.965-07:00Oh I am so glad you're doing NaNoWriMo! You go...Oh I am so glad you're doing NaNoWriMo! You go girl! I enjoyed reading your intro...I want to read more!Winter Reddhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14259800399165069360noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-394718683782139041.post-3250479943209026992012-11-10T12:34:29.087-07:002012-11-10T12:34:29.087-07:00I would say you very effectively captured scene an...I would say you very effectively captured scene and character because I have knots in my stomach. I wouldn't want to be back in his place for anything! Bullies, clichés, pimples...yikes! Mayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03485338098212307793noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-394718683782139041.post-57371324255832657102012-11-09T18:34:08.529-07:002012-11-09T18:34:08.529-07:00Perhaps a boy with some obsessive compulsive trait...Perhaps a boy with some obsessive compulsive traits? It will be interesting to see where you take this!TMWHickmanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11099277984216556857noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-394718683782139041.post-26945510939160116182012-11-09T17:00:07.060-07:002012-11-09T17:00:07.060-07:00I agree: we want to know more about Peter! You a...I agree: we want to know more about Peter! You are off to a great start, Morgan.Jerraleahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04303751802364926617noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-394718683782139041.post-59092488710089362742012-11-09T14:17:06.826-07:002012-11-09T14:17:06.826-07:00Definitely intrigued by this meticulous kid, Peter...Definitely intrigued by this meticulous kid, Peter. Love the way you start setting his character up by knowing all those numbers. <br /><br />stopping by from the WOE link upCG @ Paper Furyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14954615708675952085noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-394718683782139041.post-62098897359474353042012-11-09T14:01:32.949-07:002012-11-09T14:01:32.949-07:00You did a great job of capturing a moment. I espe...You did a great job of capturing a moment. I especially liked the line, "Then he thought better of it and slouched, hoping to better blend his lanky 5 foot 10 inch frame in among his fellow students." I can so picture an awkward kid doing this.Juliahttp://www.juliamaki.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-394718683782139041.post-5724034241472233512012-11-09T13:09:14.812-07:002012-11-09T13:09:14.812-07:00I also thought he was the Principal at first.This ...I also thought he was the Principal at first.This is good, but it didn't catch me until the 2nd para. after the countdown :<br />"Peter closed his eyes for a moment, trying to silence the overwhelming evidence that he was the new kid."<br />This is where I was hooked. can't wait to find out more about Peter the odd, cool kid.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-394718683782139041.post-44206421844710567952012-11-09T10:13:36.199-07:002012-11-09T10:13:36.199-07:00At first I thought he was the Principal of the Sch...At first I thought he was the Principal of the School, as if the school itself was new and that's why he knew the specs but then realized that he was a student which made me curious about this boy, a meticulous mind in a young teens body.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-394718683782139041.post-34055986218178834872012-11-09T09:57:35.956-07:002012-11-09T09:57:35.956-07:00I like it. I want to know more about Peter.I like it. I want to know more about Peter.Jenniferhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16666910475457302786noreply@blogger.com