tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-394718683782139041.post4365466081645419059..comments2023-10-12T03:40:27.407-06:00Comments on Snapshots: Hide and SeekMorganhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02173810987391935584noreply@blogger.comBlogger27125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-394718683782139041.post-14301028878039243052013-02-24T15:57:44.357-07:002013-02-24T15:57:44.357-07:00Terrific rendition of hide and seek! Great job.Terrific rendition of hide and seek! Great job.kymmhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18277722091216771412noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-394718683782139041.post-64826630453829347702013-02-24T14:23:34.318-07:002013-02-24T14:23:34.318-07:00This is so cute-loved the way you led the reader t...This is so cute-loved the way you led the reader to the surprise end Morgan:-)Great piece.Atreyeehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15400190416839538182noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-394718683782139041.post-83312587103643736442013-02-24T12:40:01.627-07:002013-02-24T12:40:01.627-07:00A great use of your chosen 33 words.A great use of your chosen 33 words.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-394718683782139041.post-47158591097075402662013-02-23T20:50:11.201-07:002013-02-23T20:50:11.201-07:00I'm all about the kid stuff so, believe me whe...I'm all about the kid stuff so, believe me when I tell you that I appreciate the lengths you went to make this scene simple yet, full, at the same time. Adults don't often write children well but, you did! Thanks for going where you went.Thomas Charles MacInneshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11331362298948608531noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-394718683782139041.post-4630242155644764632013-02-23T17:02:56.707-07:002013-02-23T17:02:56.707-07:00That's great! Much lighter than many of the o...That's great! Much lighter than many of the other pieces. Refreshing!Trifectahttp://www.trifectawritingchallenge.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-394718683782139041.post-50958421666130158552013-02-23T14:49:20.766-07:002013-02-23T14:49:20.766-07:00Thank you! I tend to steer away from too much doo...Thank you! I tend to steer away from too much doom and gloom. And with the many, many hide-n-seek games that take place in our home, I had plenty of inspiration!Morganhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02173810987391935584noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-394718683782139041.post-17500313039126479252013-02-23T14:48:24.828-07:002013-02-23T14:48:24.828-07:00exactly! Or worse yet, found ourselves horribly u...exactly! Or worse yet, found ourselves horribly uncomfortable and unable to stretch an arm or a leg for fear of giving ourselves up!Morganhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02173810987391935584noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-394718683782139041.post-71099785719106653722013-02-23T14:47:41.649-07:002013-02-23T14:47:41.649-07:00Thank you! It was fun and challenging all at once...Thank you! It was fun and challenging all at once!Morganhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02173810987391935584noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-394718683782139041.post-68926043348621759772013-02-23T14:47:24.792-07:002013-02-23T14:47:24.792-07:00Yes - the original excerpt was so dark and sad. M...Yes - the original excerpt was so dark and sad. My brain went in a completely fresh direction! Thanks for your kind words.Morganhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02173810987391935584noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-394718683782139041.post-83517950336397967312013-02-23T14:46:39.937-07:002013-02-23T14:46:39.937-07:00Thank you - it was certainly a challenge, but I wa...Thank you - it was certainly a challenge, but I was pleased with the result.Morganhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02173810987391935584noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-394718683782139041.post-2949554115351654022013-02-23T14:46:05.987-07:002013-02-23T14:46:05.987-07:00Thank you - on reading through the excerpt, the wo...Thank you - on reading through the excerpt, the words "prickling", "sensation" and "hiding" all jumped out at me ... and memories of hiding and longing to be free of a cramped hiding place wrote the rest!Morganhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02173810987391935584noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-394718683782139041.post-67114642087598150452013-02-23T14:44:26.372-07:002013-02-23T14:44:26.372-07:00Thank you - I felt the phrasing was stilted as a r...Thank you - I felt the phrasing was stilted as a result of the limited words, but a little childlike, too.Morganhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02173810987391935584noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-394718683782139041.post-21233846983672668282013-02-23T14:42:06.512-07:002013-02-23T14:42:06.512-07:00Thank you ... we have a lot of hide-n-seek in our ...Thank you ... we have a lot of hide-n-seek in our house, so it came from real life experiences!Morganhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02173810987391935584noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-394718683782139041.post-56672032684689157532013-02-23T14:41:39.223-07:002013-02-23T14:41:39.223-07:00Thank you - this was a definite challenge, but sat...Thank you - this was a definite challenge, but satisfying to see it come together.Morganhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02173810987391935584noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-394718683782139041.post-3738450687373184772013-02-23T14:41:12.072-07:002013-02-23T14:41:12.072-07:00Thank you ... I struggled with that line because I...Thank you ... I struggled with that line because I really wanted there to be a "be" in the writing. Little tweaks and twists to make it work.Morganhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02173810987391935584noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-394718683782139041.post-52331206982033764392013-02-23T11:13:34.774-07:002013-02-23T11:13:34.774-07:00Beautiful! I really liked the lightness of this p...Beautiful! I really liked the lightness of this piece. TMWHickmanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11099277984216556857noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-394718683782139041.post-17491489159593254072013-02-23T10:23:53.246-07:002013-02-23T10:23:53.246-07:00this is great - who among us hasn't played hid...this is great - who among us hasn't played hide and seek and feared being the forgotten one. barbarahttp://purplemoose.kenaiwriter.netnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-394718683782139041.post-49701589048936176192013-02-23T09:35:45.049-07:002013-02-23T09:35:45.049-07:00Great idea! Great idea! Bohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05985370927609164513noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-394718683782139041.post-31085603987080062792013-02-23T06:23:03.383-07:002013-02-23T06:23:03.383-07:00very nice! I enjoyed seeing you shape the words in...very nice! I enjoyed seeing you shape the words into a completely different kind of story. -jAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-394718683782139041.post-87012870741008396892013-02-23T05:20:22.069-07:002013-02-23T05:20:22.069-07:00Wow! This is a fun story and an amazing reformatio...Wow! This is a fun story and an amazing reformation of the words. lumdog2012https://www.blogger.com/profile/04898266027462039531noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-394718683782139041.post-41866980113444586052013-02-22T23:00:35.534-07:002013-02-22T23:00:35.534-07:00Hide and Seek - what an interesting use of the wor...Hide and Seek - what an interesting use of the words Morgan - light and airy - enjoyed, :-)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10020430647050532416noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-394718683782139041.post-6293271783134035922013-02-22T19:25:12.978-07:002013-02-22T19:25:12.978-07:00This is great! (: I love it so much--all the whole...This is great! (: I love it so much--all the whole jumbled words fit so well together.Draughttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09778248789422474009noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-394718683782139041.post-34403259405278782542013-02-22T19:07:41.700-07:002013-02-22T19:07:41.700-07:00Haha, nice twist! :)Haha, nice twist! :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-394718683782139041.post-63007806917586096362013-02-22T18:05:14.686-07:002013-02-22T18:05:14.686-07:00haha you did a wonderful job with this ^^haha you did a wonderful job with this ^^Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-394718683782139041.post-36029752492422566872013-02-22T13:24:53.573-07:002013-02-22T13:24:53.573-07:00"...urgent and all but discovered." Love..."...urgent and all but discovered." Lovely.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com