tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-394718683782139041.post3127277410985962224..comments2023-10-12T03:40:27.407-06:00Comments on Snapshots: Neighborhood WatchMorganhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02173810987391935584noreply@blogger.comBlogger14125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-394718683782139041.post-65088115932726225502014-01-28T14:09:57.515-07:002014-01-28T14:09:57.515-07:00Thank you, Cameron. She yakked away in my head for...Thank you, Cameron. She yakked away in my head for a couple of days before I got her on paper. She was fun to "interview". I'm not even sure what the crime was (yet) but I think I might have to flesh this situation out a bit.Morganhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02173810987391935584noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-394718683782139041.post-36721993836095340212014-01-28T14:08:41.184-07:002014-01-28T14:08:41.184-07:00Thank you! Her voice was very strong in my head, t...Thank you! Her voice was very strong in my head, too. I was happy to have her translate to the page as well as she did.Morganhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02173810987391935584noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-394718683782139041.post-73505151324862531932014-01-28T14:07:45.095-07:002014-01-28T14:07:45.095-07:00Thank you, Mandy. I do love the idea of someone ke...Thank you, Mandy. I do love the idea of someone keeping tabs, knowing the comings and goings of her neighbors, but with a good heart. Thanks for stopping by!Morganhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02173810987391935584noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-394718683782139041.post-70462552382999199192014-01-28T06:29:22.887-07:002014-01-28T06:29:22.887-07:00Mandy said it perfectly, with the Rear Window refe...Mandy said it perfectly, with the Rear Window reference. Hopefully the officer isn't investigating a murder! Great character in the landlady, Morgan.Cameronhttp://camerondgarriepy.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-394718683782139041.post-6054262261048171362014-01-23T17:42:20.755-07:002014-01-23T17:42:20.755-07:00Very typical city landlady chatter--you captured h...Very typical city landlady chatter--you captured her so perfectly. I could see her in my head!TMWHickmanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11099277984216556857noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-394718683782139041.post-72078644264849027182014-01-23T10:44:16.860-07:002014-01-23T10:44:16.860-07:00This reminded me of Rear Window with all the busyb...This reminded me of Rear Window with all the busybodiness of neighbors in close proximity. :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-394718683782139041.post-39436225658702757702014-01-22T15:03:04.386-07:002014-01-22T15:03:04.386-07:00Thank you, Roxanne. In truth, I'm not sure wha...Thank you, Roxanne. In truth, I'm not sure what the crime was...I simply liked the premise of one lady knowing the comings and goings of the entire building! I might need to flesh this story out because, as you said, there's a lot of potential for an interesting tale.Morganhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02173810987391935584noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-394718683782139041.post-35687193961760101912014-01-22T11:20:29.958-07:002014-01-22T11:20:29.958-07:00I love stories that combine various people and the...I love stories that combine various people and their backgrounds. I'd love to hear more about the crime and what happened. Great character descriptions. There's so much you could do with this!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-394718683782139041.post-25612256826497238932014-01-22T08:01:07.662-07:002014-01-22T08:01:07.662-07:00Thank you, Angela. I wanted to focus on the reside...Thank you, Angela. I wanted to focus on the residents, but I knew I needed to anchor it somewhere. I think there is more to this story...but I hope the trouble maker isn't the grandson. I guess I'll have to find out!Morganhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02173810987391935584noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-394718683782139041.post-20811289143828925322014-01-22T07:59:59.566-07:002014-01-22T07:59:59.566-07:00Thank you, Kelly. They were the first tenants to i...Thank you, Kelly. They were the first tenants to introduce themselves to me. The rest followed suit.Morganhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02173810987391935584noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-394718683782139041.post-80711267306522465142014-01-22T07:58:49.318-07:002014-01-22T07:58:49.318-07:00Thank you...I'm glad, too. :)Thank you...I'm glad, too. :)Morganhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02173810987391935584noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-394718683782139041.post-91233161353666553302014-01-22T07:43:09.960-07:002014-01-22T07:43:09.960-07:00I like how you tied it to a questioning about a cr...I like how you tied it to a questioning about a crime, and you did a great job showing how there's always something who knows everything going on in a building like that!angelahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14974137283220034062noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-394718683782139041.post-86188417071691783382014-01-21T17:59:37.604-07:002014-01-21T17:59:37.604-07:00Great write - Great descriptions of these characte...Great write - Great descriptions of these characters, most especially, The Bobsey Twins.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03554662447246962880noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-394718683782139041.post-76296287482495737232014-01-21T16:11:09.828-07:002014-01-21T16:11:09.828-07:00I've been missing your stories. Glad you'r...I've been missing your stories. Glad you're posting again : )lindahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15923831406144286359noreply@blogger.com